Wow. That was intense. Bang!
Megan sure can write some gory stuff.
Oh wow, this is really good (:
"His breath is a ghost."Hauntingly gorgeous, Megan! This is really good!
"...halo around him." Nice. I mean horrid, but lovely!
How gory !But I loved it :D Beautiful last line too:-)
A very descriptive gory tale. One of my favorites. Well done!
Powerful stuff. I love the ghost breath line.Thanks for linking up!
Like the halo and the breath being a ghost. The fact that he's still trying...