A Lover Lost

On to the weekend challenge.  This weekend we want you to give us 33 words (exactly) that include among them at least one example of onomatopoeia. 







Bang.

He pulls the trigger. Blood spatter and brains halo around him.

“I’m sorry.” His breath is a ghost.

He tries to forget the blue of her eyes, lies for someone else’s life.

9 comments:

  1. Wow. That was intense. Bang!

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  2. Megan sure can write some gory stuff.

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  3. Oh wow, this is really good (:

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  4. "His breath is a ghost."
    Hauntingly gorgeous, Megan! This is really good!

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  5. "...halo around him." Nice. I mean horrid, but lovely!

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  6. Atreyee MukherjeeMay 12, 2013 at 2:01 PM

    How gory !But I loved it :D Beautiful last line too:-)

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  7. Barbara Mizzoni-YoungMay 12, 2013 at 5:16 PM

    A very descriptive gory tale. One of my favorites. Well done!

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  8. Powerful stuff. I love the ghost breath line.

    Thanks for linking up!

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  9. Like the halo and the breath being a ghost. The fact that he's still trying...

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